Alright guys, I posted Chap 2 on fanfiction.net and I sent Tails and Amy their Chap 2 stuff. Now, here's Chap 3, tell me what you think.
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As Tails pushed the X-Tornado to her limit, he had a million and one things racing through his mind, all jockeying for position in his brain as to what he would think of first.
“I hope that my plan works!”
“What if it doesn’t work?!”
“Is Gemerl ok?”
“Will Cream be ok if Gemerl’s NOT ok?”
Even with all that racing through his mind, he still managed to find it inside himself to masterfully pilot his most valuable creation through the skies.
“We’re almost there gang!” the two-tailed fox exclaimed.
“I think we’re there now! Look down there!” Knuckles exclaimed. The group looked down and saw Gemerl fighting off robots left and right, his Gizoid powers smashing through robot after robot as they came. “Those robots look familiar.” Amy said thoughtfully.
As the X-Tornado flew in lower, they realized exactly why the robots looked familiar. “It’s a bunch of those freaky Metal Sonic clones!” Knuckles roared. “Hurry Tails! Gemerl doesn’t look like he can take much more!” Cream cried.
“Hang on guys! We’re coming in for a landing!” Tails found a nearby clearing where he could land, running over a mob of red Metal Sonics in the process. In a matter of seconds they were swarmed by snarling robots, clawing viciously at the cockpit. “Tails, do something!” Cream whimpered.
“I’LL do something! I’m taking them down!” Knuckles growled. Knuckles hit the eject button on his seat, and the fiery echidna jumped off of his seat and punched down three Metal Sonics at once.
But he was quickly swarmed by dozens more, they were quite literally everywhere. “A little help here?!” the echidna yelled. Tails was about to open the cockpit, when a bunch more Metal Sonics swarmed the ship. “We can’t get anywhere as long as these robots are on top of us!” Amy exclaimed angrily.
Then if things weren’t bad enough, the group saw both Knuckles and Gemerl taking a serious beating. The red Metal Sonics slashed mercilessly at the echidna’s body, invoking grunts and groans of pain from the guardian’s mouth.
And the revamped Gizoid was not any better off, even with his powers, the robot guardian could not hold off the sheer amount of numbers that were opposing him.
Crackling and struggling to stay upright, one last blow to the Gizoid’s head knocked Gemerl out. “Oh no! Gemerl!” Cream cried for her friend.
Just when things seemed hopeless, two hedgehogs came from nowhere and started knocking robots around. “Who are they?” Amy asked. Within a matter of seconds, the robots around the cockpit mysteriously froze up, and fell to the ground.
“Everyone out now!” the black and blue hedgehog yelled. Tails took the opportunity and ejected the group from the swarmed plane, and the battle immediately got started again. The two strangers freed Knuckles and Gemerl, and then moved on to continue the attack.
“Crash! Heads up!” the black and blue hedgehog yelled. The cyan hedgehog quickly turned around and sliced the attacking red Metal Sonic with his signature plasma sword, and then charged ahead to slice up one that had caught his buddy off guard. “Just returning the favor Dash.” Crash snickered.
Dash smirked and blasted away with his freezing ice powers, ultimately causing the robots to crumble into chunks of ice.
But then the battle started getting really heated as one enormous robot came out of nowhere with another army, and started knocking the group around. “Where are they all coming from?!” Crash yelled.
“I don’t know, but as long as they keep coming I’ll keep punching!” Knuckles roared, as he took down two more. “Well what’ll you do about him?!” Dash yelled, referring to the huge one bearing down on them.
The enormous robot swept its arm, and knocked each and every one of the group, excluding Cream who was standing back to avoid danger, onto their backs. Of course in doing so, it destroyed the other Metal Sonics remaining. “That thing’s not like the little ones! It’s powered by something!” Tails exclaimed.
With the hazard of the regular robots eliminated, the group quickly got up and started dodging the attacks of the huge red Metal Sonic. “I can’t even dent this thing!” Knuckles growled as he continued to punch the leg of the robot.
Even the powers and weapons of the two strangers were ineffective against the monster, Dash’s ice powers couldn’t cleanly freeze the metallic structure due to the sheer size, and the robot was apparently protected against Crash’s Plasma Sword. “Shoot! I can’t get through!” the cyan hedgehog exclaimed.
The robot slowly swung its arm again, and once again the group was knocked back. “Eggman’s gotta be behind this somehow!” Amy exclaimed angrily.
“Dash, backup time?” Crash asked nervously. Dash nodded and turned on his wrist communicator, “Ashley, we need help! Come to these coordinates immediately!” However by the time Dash finished the communication, the giant robot had grabbed him and Crash in one hand, and the other three in the other.
“Oh no!” Cream cried from the clearing. But just as she said that, a black blur zoomed past her, causing her to brace herself to prevent being blown away.
The group continued to attack even in their captured state, but the robot stayed firm. But just when things seemed hopeless, a blast of yellow energy came from nowhere and knocked the huge robot off balance. “Was that…?” Amy asked.
“I think so…” Tails replied. All of a sudden, the robot started shaking and sparking violently, its body was being assaulted from the inside out, and it wouldn’t be long before it blew up.
“Hit the dirt!” Dash yelled. The group ducked and covered as the robot gave one last metallic shriek before it blew up, and a black blur emerged holding a shining jewel.
“Oh no way.” Dash grumbled. “Thanks Shadow, we were really in a jam there.” Tails said, extending a hand to Shadow. Shadow just crossed his arms and closed his eyes. “Believe me, the only reason I was here was to save this.” Shadow was holding a shining gem that seemed to emanate power.
“Is that a Chaos Emerald?” Amy asked. “Can’t be, Zero has all the emeralds.” Knuckles replied. “Indeed I do!” the group looked up and saw Zero 3 charging towards them at blinding speed.
Shadow managed to warp away in time, but the others were knocked back by the sonic boom created by the body Zero was encased in. “What’s your problem Sonic?” Shadow asked in his usual uninterested tone.
“That’s not Sonic, Shadow!” Tails warned. Shadow just raised an eyebrow at the young fox, but that would prove to be a mistake. “Chaos Control!” the monster vanished from sight, catching Shadow off guard. “Shadow, get out of there!” Knuckles roared.
It was too late. The moment Zero 3 came out of Chaos Control, Shadow was hit hard, and the black hedgehog relinquished the item in his possession. “Why thank you Shadow, I appreciate i – arrgh!” Zero 3 began cringing in pain once again, as Sonic was apparently still inside, fighting against the monster’s will. “Enough’s…enough! Stop…hurting my friends!”
That’s when Tails made his move. “We don’t have a lot of time! Knuckles, Shadow, hold Zero down while I reverse the polarity on my Gene Splicer!” Without hesitating, Knuckles and Shadow jumped into the air and brought the struggling Zero/Sonic down to earth.
“C’mon Crash!” Dash and his friend grabbed the golden being’s arms, while Knuckles and Shadow grabbed his legs.
“On your what?” Amy asked. “It’s a machine I designed to merge two objects into one! Theoretically, with reversed polarity, I could split Sonic’s molecular structure from Zero’s!” Tails explained.
“Theoretically? What happens to Sonic if it DOESN’T work?” Amy asked worriedly. “He…H-He may not survive the shock of being split since Zero has such a tight grip on him…it may not even work at all…but we’d have to kill Sonic otherwise! At least this way he has a chance!” Tails explained.
“Hey Tails, hurry up with that thing already!” Knuckles yelled, as he and the three hedgehogs struggled to keep the snarling monster at bay. The golden aura burned through their gloves, inflicting a searing pain on their hands.
“Alright, here goes nothing!” Tails fired, and the electric beam struck just after Zero 3 had managed to break free of the group’s grip. With grunts and groans from both sides of the merged being, the crackling electricity practically blinded them with its sheer brightness.
“Sonic, please be ok.” Amy begged quietly. “What’s…happening to me?” Zero grunted. “We’re being…split apart!” Sonic exclaimed, although painfully.
“Must…maintain…my form!” Zero strained. Zero fought with all his might to maintain control over Sonic’s body, and for a moment it seemed that it would work. “Sonic!” the distressed voices of his friends strengthened Sonic’s will to win, and with one last burst of strength, Sonic pushed away from Zero, and in a flash of blinding white light, Sonic fell to the ground.
“Sonic!” Tails, Amy, Cream, and Knuckles ran to tend to their friend, while Shadow, Dash, and Crash held back. “Is Mr. Sonic ok?” Cream asked with concern. Amy was the first one to check Sonic’s condition. The young pink hedgehog reached for his wrist to check for a pulse. “It’s weak!” she gasped despairingly.
“And what happened to Zero?” Tails asked. As if to answer their question, Eggman appeared. “What a pleasure it is to see you all here again.” the evil scientist chortled. “Cut the friendly act Eggman! What did you do to Sonic?” Knuckles roared.
“I did not do anything actually; it was the fox boy’s Gene Splicer that made him lose consciousness. For a moment it seemed that I would have to figure out a new plan, but now behold the monster that you’ve created.” Eggman waved his hand and showed the group something they couldn’t believe was true. “It…can’t be.” Amy gasped.
What they saw was Zero 3, still encased in Sonic’s form. “I was wondering how I would prevent Sonic from further interfering with my plan, but thanks to you fox boy, I no longer have to worry. Sonic is clearly out of the picture now, so there’s no one else who can stop me!”
“You mean…if I hadn’t…” Tails was cut-off. “Indeed, Sonic was already extremely weak due to sharing a body with Zero, but now that he’s been split apart from Zero’s support, you may have sent him hurtling into an irreversible state of unconsciousness, meanwhile Zero has fully adapted to Sonic’s form, and no longer requires Sonic’s support.”
“You…you butcher!” Knuckles charged for Eggman, but Zero acted almost instantaneously, and hit the guardian hard enough to put him into a crater. “Knuckles!” they cried.
Now Shadow had seen enough. “I’m afraid I can’t let you do this doctor.” the black hedgehog said determinedly. “Shadow, you’re here too I see. You’ve come for this emerald I suppose?” Eggman replied, holding up a shining stone.
Shadow growled and vanished as he activated Chaos Control, but Zero 3 was once again prepared as he too activated the mysterious ability and vanished as well. “Quick! While Shadow fights off Zero, let’s get out of here!” Dash exclaimed suddenly.
“Not so fast, we don’t know why you wanna help us; in fact we don’t even know you.” Knuckles said suspiciously. “Knuckles don’t be such a pain! They’re giving us a chance to get Sonic to safety!” Amy slung Sonic over her powerful, hammer-toting arms and took off running as fast as her legs could carry her, with Tails and Cream not far behind.
“Wait, what about Gemerl?” Cream cried. Knuckles looked at the two hedgehogs and growled. “Alright, you REALLY wanna help? Grab that robot and follow us!” Knuckles charged ahead to act as escort for his friends, leaving Dash and Crash semi-by themselves.
“And who are you two supposed to be? Sonic’s replacements?” Eggman chortled. “Just a couple of guys looking for something to do. Beating you and your friends should take care of that problem.” Dash jeered.
“If you insist. Zero! Dispose of them!” Eggman ordered. Zero came out of Chaos Control holding Shadow tightly around the neck, with the black hedgehog struggling to break free of the Chaos Emerald powered being’s death grip.
“Y-You’ll regret messing with the ultimate life form!” Shadow croaked. Zero merely stayed silent and slammed Shadow onto the floor. The black hedgehog fought to continue the fight, but eventually ran out of strength and simply passed out.
“Good Zero. Let’s take him with us so that I may add his DNA to yours.” Eggman chortled evilly. Dash acted purely out of instinct when he grabbed Shadow and took off running with Crash trailing behind. “Bah, no matter. Come Zero; let us continue building on your power.” Eggman chortled.
“This is Dash. Ashley, change of plans, I’ll give you new coordinates upon arrival to our destination.” Dash continued to run while toting the unconscious hedgehog over his shoulder.
“Hey Dash, you know what’s funny? You’re carrying the dude Ashley’s got a crush on.” Crash said while toting the badly damaged Gizoid.
Dash’s eyes widened as he realized what Crash said. “And I just called her to meet him.”
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Well guys?
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im getting sick of him bieng used as a benchmark, ugh....please, just ditch quicksilver or use the old design, i mean wings is stupid unless theyre smalll, and even then there wouldnt be any use for them, ohmagawd just stop thinking blade is the best and only spriter!
And time placement, sorry about that. 
in case you didnt catch on, that my friends was sarcasm, i find your comment hurtfull, in fact i couldnt care less whether myst is in it thanks, so no need for the howdy'do and the hoot and a holler to rille me up, because im not one to be riled, remember that your not the only capable person here, fact.