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    Post by EchidnaPower Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:17 pm

    Don't know where to put it, so I'll just put it here. Here's the start of the sequel. Written mostly by Myst, I only did small changes and spell checks.
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    (One day at the beach)
    "Hey!" exclaimed Daze as Sped ran to him, "Let me have a little space ok!” Sped laughed, picked up a sandwich and smushed it in her hands. “If you say that again,” Sped threatened playfully. “Then I’ll smush you like this sandwich."
    Daze gulped and replied "The guys will be here any minute! If they see this then they'll freak!"
    "SO?"
    "....I don’t want trouble on our reunion party!”
    “Hmmph, the reunion party, it’s no big deal,” Sped said dramatically. “For what...what could be more important than us?!"
    “The guys and us saving the world?"
    "..."

    "Pwned!" yelled Daze triumphantly as he grabbed another sandwich, Sped sat down and scowled playfully at him.

    After a while of awkward silence between the would-be couple, Myst arrived. “ ‘Sup, Daze...Sped, Myst said casually, “What’s for lunch?”
    "You're two minutes late. "said Daze.
    "Ok...I was late because Sonic got slowed down by Eggman...so he won’t be coming for a while, we all got separated...my weapon broke and Dash is with Sonic."
    "Weapon? The others?"
    "Everyone else is coming I think-"
    "-Weapon? Sped doesn’t allow weapons."
    Myst laughed and lifted up an old Japanese umbrella, it was broken in the center, “Since when do you care what Sped thinks?” Sped growled and slashed Myst’s umbrella to pieces with the butter knife they had brought. Myst growled in horror and their eyes locked-they knew that there was a challenge on the way but-BOOM!

    The loud noise made them forget their hassle, they swiveled their heads to the sky and saw a bright light flashing across the sky.

    And so it begins...again!
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    Post by Guest Sat Nov 28, 2009 3:39 am

    COOL!
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    Post by supersonicdx Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:13 am

    EchidnaPower wrote:Don't know where to put it, so I'll just put it here. Here's the start of the sequel. Written mostly by Myst, I only did small changes and spell checks.
    .................................................................................................................
    (One day at the beach)
    "Hey!" exclaimed Daze as Sped ran to him, "Let me have a little space ok!” Sped laughed, picked up a sandwich and smushed it in her hands. “If you say that again,” Sped threatened playfully. “Then I’ll smush you like this sandwich."
    Daze gulped and replied "The guys will be here any minute! If they see this then they'll freak!"
    "SO?"
    "....I don’t want trouble on our reunion party!”
    “Hmmph, the reunion party, it’s no big deal,” Sped said dramatically. “For what...what could be more important than us?!"
    “The guys and us saving the world?"
    "..."

    "Pwned!" yelled Daze triumphantly as he grabbed another sandwich, Sped sat down and scowled playfully at him.

    After a while of awkward silence between the would-be couple, Myst arrived. “ ‘Sup, Daze...Sped, Myst said casually, “What’s for lunch?”
    "You're two minutes late. "said Daze.
    "Ok...I was late because Sonic got slowed down by Eggman...so he won’t be coming for a while, we all got separated...my weapon broke and Dash is with Sonic."
    "Weapon? The others?"
    "Everyone else is coming I think-"
    "-Weapon? Sped doesn’t allow weapons."
    Myst laughed and lifted up an old Japanese umbrella, it was broken in the center, “Since when do you care what Sped thinks?” Sped growled and slashed Myst’s umbrella to pieces with the butter knife they had brought. Myst growled in horror and their eyes locked-they knew that there was a challenge on the way but-BOOM!

    The loud noise made them forget their hassle, they swiveled their heads to the sky and saw a bright light flashing across the sky.

    And so it begins...again!

    Ok, hold up..how can you start the sequel story when we don't know all the characters that are going to be in it.. sonic laying down
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    Post by Guest Sat Nov 28, 2009 10:54 am

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    Post by EchidnaPower Sat Nov 28, 2009 11:35 am

    supersonicdx wrote:
    EchidnaPower wrote:Don't know where to put it, so I'll just put it here. Here's the start of the sequel. Written mostly by Myst, I only did small changes and spell checks.
    .................................................................................................................
    (One day at the beach)
    "Hey!" exclaimed Daze as Sped ran to him, "Let me have a little space ok!” Sped laughed, picked up a sandwich and smushed it in her hands. “If you say that again,” Sped threatened playfully. “Then I’ll smush you like this sandwich."
    Daze gulped and replied "The guys will be here any minute! If they see this then they'll freak!"
    "SO?"
    "....I don’t want trouble on our reunion party!”
    “Hmmph, the reunion party, it’s no big deal,” Sped said dramatically. “For what...what could be more important than us?!"
    “The guys and us saving the world?"
    "..."

    "Pwned!" yelled Daze triumphantly as he grabbed another sandwich, Sped sat down and scowled playfully at him.

    After a while of awkward silence between the would-be couple, Myst arrived. “ ‘Sup, Daze...Sped, Myst said casually, “What’s for lunch?”
    "You're two minutes late. "said Daze.
    "Ok...I was late because Sonic got slowed down by Eggman...so he won’t be coming for a while, we all got separated...my weapon broke and Dash is with Sonic."
    "Weapon? The others?"
    "Everyone else is coming I think-"
    "-Weapon? Sped doesn’t allow weapons."
    Myst laughed and lifted up an old Japanese umbrella, it was broken in the center, “Since when do you care what Sped thinks?” Sped growled and slashed Myst’s umbrella to pieces with the butter knife they had brought. Myst growled in horror and their eyes locked-they knew that there was a challenge on the way but-BOOM!

    The loud noise made them forget their hassle, they swiveled their heads to the sky and saw a bright light flashing across the sky.

    And so it begins...again!

    Ok, hold up..how can you start the sequel story when we don't know all the characters that are going to be in it.. sonic laying down

    we kinda do. Any characters that aren't going to be part of this story stay behind, and then we start adding characters as we go.
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    Post by supersonicdx Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:28 pm

    Well im glad we are talking about a sequel already..hope to see some new faces. Wink
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    Post by Guest Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:36 am

    Im glad that Daze is gonna be playable in this 1.
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    Post by Myst_thefox Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:17 am

    arent you posting the rest?
    have you read the rest?
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    Post by Guest Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:17 pm

    I wanna see the rest!
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    Post by EchidnaPower Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:37 pm

    I've got a lot on my chest gang. I'm feeling kinda depressed. I'll need a few days.
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    Post by Guest Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:19 am

    yr not the only 1
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    Post by Myst_thefox Mon Nov 30, 2009 11:10 am

    ok,ill post the next parts Hysterical
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    Post by Guest Mon Nov 30, 2009 11:50 am

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