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    Mobius Chronicles

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    ChaosDazer
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    Mobius Chronicles

    Post by ChaosDazer on Tue Jan 05, 2010 12:36 pm

    (((Set 50 years after the death of Sonic and Eggman)))
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    Chapter one: Melodramatic Git!
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    "AHHHHHHHH!"
    Solar was burning from the inside. He imagined this is how it felt, standing upon the sun. He knew he was on his last breath. He could feel himself sinking, descending into darkness.

    It felt like forever. He was constantly pondering what was going to happen to him, would he go to Heaven? Is there a Heaven? Would he become a ghost? He was in question of all the basic beliefs he had been taught, and yet he felt like he was still alive. His body was numb, but his mind was as active as ever. It only seemed like a second when he realized he was lying in a large rounded part.

    "What?"

    Solar stood up. No pain. He straightened up and looked around, up at the shining sun and blue sky. He looked at himself, and instantly knew he was in his own body. Although his skin was now red and he had yellow highlights, he was still the same Hedgehog as he was yesterday. At least, it felt like yesterday.

    He breathed in the sweet, pure air. Yes, air! It was a feeling he had forgotten already. Oh, wait until his family found out about this! Was it a dream? There was only one way to find out...

    "I'M ALLLIIIVVVEEE!" He screamed at the top of his voice. He could hear himself shouting, this must be real! Then out of no-where, it seemed a member of the crowd was looking at him from atop the cylinder. He couldn't make out the shape, another animal? It was hard to see know that he realized how low down he was, in this Grey metal pit. It was not dark though it was cold and slightly wet.

    The crowd member looked down and shouted-
    "Melodramatic Git!"

    Yes, Solar has just survived being dropped in a pit of Toxic water. He was alive.
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    Re: Mobius Chronicles

    Post by dazethehedghog on Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:33 pm

    Cool
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    Re: Mobius Chronicles

    Post by ChaosDazer on Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:28 am

    Solar looked up at the one who had just shouted at him. Now that the light was brighter, he could make him out. A muscular Echidna, around the same size as himself, with black skin. He had blazing red eyes and shorter hair then most Echidnas he had met before.

    Solar knew his voice couldn't carry all the way to the top, otherwise he would of shouted a snappy remark back. Instead he looked around for any footholds that he could climb up on. But the Metal was perfect, no scratches or dents inside. There was no way to get up, although he felt like doing what came natural to him. Lunar walked back, facing the wall in front, and sprinted towards it. His plan was to jump back and forth from wall to wall like his hero, Sonic. He would then be able to get up and give them Echidna what was coming to him! He was ready jump, until.....


    "Woah!"

    He slipped over and landed straight on his face, smashing into the hard surface. He stood up as though nothing had happened, and tried again. This time he would watch his footing! Solar ran towards the surface, jumped, and pushed off the first wall. He spun around, sprang of the Adjacent wall, and continued to go up. "This is easy!" He thought to himself. As he finally got up the wall, he back-flipped onto the pavement. After falling into the pit, he seemed much more agile than before.

    He stood there, while the black Echidna was in shock. On Closer inspection his hair was tinged with purple highlights and shoes where different colors, one green and one blue. The black Echidna backed away slowly, watching the red hedgehog in case of any sudden moves. "What am I thinking, I'm not scared of THIS runt!" He thought to himself. He then turned away and walked casually back through the crowded street. No-one had noticed Solar.

    "Weirdo" Solar whispered under his breath.
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    Re: Mobius Chronicles

    Post by dazethehedghog on Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:51 am

    A bit confusing but still cool

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