Sonic Free Riders: Your Storyline

My last 'Riders' roleplay failed... AGAIN.
So here's, like, the third riders roleplay. No FC things, it's all the Sonic Characters. It's really Sonic Free Riders, but you can mess up the storyline to make your own.

For example: Eggman promises a lifetime supply of cash for being the Grand Prix champ; it's really a supply of Chocolate Coins.

heres mine -ending wise

it was a beutiful day in dolphin park (or wherever it is )

while sonic and jet was racing ,with shadow and amy right behind them

metal sonic appears and wipes them out and unfortunatly the emeralds were nearby ,so metal took them and turned super ,luckly sonic, shadow ,jet and amy could turn super too ,so they turned super but every where was then destory ,so the 4 heroes knew what to do ,they chased after the metal that flew off and the final race began

so how was that

Pretty good.

sonic falls off a cliff and goes into a black hole by mistake,he goes to a weird dimension and goes crazy and builds robots that rampage the dimension,so tails and co. go into the dimension and try to snap sonic out of it,and help them turn the robots off because the robots found the robots black hole and went into the dimension (where we started the story),so you play as all the characters in four different teams(team helicopter,(tails cream and wave)team blast,(knuckles storm and vector)team speed,(jet shadow espio)and sonic empire(sonic and two of his robots)team sonic empire is mainly getting away from the others,other teams is mainly just catching sonic.

good?

pretty good